Nowadays many students live with their families while others go to another city to study at university. Discuss advantages and disadvantages of both scenarios. Include relevant examples in your answer.

In the current days, as a matter of the fact that many prefer

keep

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to keep

studying and living with their relatives,

conversely

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of those ones who have proceed academic studies in a different

place

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. In

this

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essay will be discussed the benefits and drawbacks of both situations, thereby in the

first

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place

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will argue of carrying out by the convenience remained to

live

go away from a place

leave

family

place

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, following by

explain

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explaining

the key aspects of study in another

place

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. It is believed that there are as

much

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many

positive sides as negative ones, when it is concerning to be convenient living in

parents’

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the parents’ house

house

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in meanwhile one is studying at university.

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means that the advantages passed through

balance

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the balance

by

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of

the equally

important of

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important, of

financial

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finances

finance

and the student’s time management,

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,

first

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of all, parents cannot afford the amount of money in expenses,

such

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as a room, the flat bills, and transportation.

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to that the saving time is

also

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to be considered due to the fact take care of a

house

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is

quit

to a degree (not used with a negative)

quite

important and not all of people who leave secondary can

doing

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do

so, especially cleaning the

house

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, cooking, and washing clothes.

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, the disadvantages

is related

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are related

to the lack of

independency

freedom from control or influence of another or others

independence

those youths cannot experience it as well as the individual’s growth is far away from distant of those who deal with all the responsibilities in their daily routines.

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, in Portugal, several of the studies

from

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of

scholars are revealed that an overwhelming 79% of students believed that

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the thing named or in question

it

is important to study in the same or nearest

city

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due to the fact that conviction represents saving in transports, food and

house

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expenses, and yet they just have to pay the university degree. In the light of the advantages along with disadvantages of those ones who decided in

carry

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carrying

out their studies in a distinct

city

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, it will provide a real

challenges

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challenge

on to optimise the process of upgrading.

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means that the positive side

on

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of

this

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event is based on the courage to quit of used to hearing and for the purpose of following their dreams. Those young adults face the

independency

free from external control and constraint

independent

and all the new responsibilities surrounding it. Whilst, the negative ones present an industrious number of

adaptation

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adaptations

to

the newest

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the new

lifestyle, namely the university and

city

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’s culture, and creating a new networking

connections

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connection

.

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, according to some Psychology Magazines which introduce a higher percentage of citizens who left home at the age of 18 become earliest independent

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identified

them

of them or themselves

their

professional and personal life goals aligned rather than those who doing so after the age of 27. To sum up, as has been noted both

scenarios living

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scenarios, living

in

relatives’

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relatives’ houses

a relatives’ house

the relatives’ house

house

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and studying in a different

city

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have benefits and drawbacks, the best for each individual is analysis them ambitions in conforming with the investment, not only monetary but

also

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motivation and focusing in a clear objective, those must be calculated. Obviously, it is thought that living in

other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

place

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brings more and new experience, it represents

th

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the

growth, whereas remain in the same

city

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provides

a

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an

efficient managing time and saving money.