You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line chart shows the proportion of tourists
visited
Correct pronoun usage
who visited
in
many attraction sites in Brighton of England between 1980 and 2010.
From the chart, we can see that Change preposition
apply
in
1980 to 2010, the most Change preposition
from
favorite
site was the pavilion and the festival. In 1980 the pier was the least popular destination Change the spelling
favourite
while
the art gallery was the least attractive in 2010.
During 1980 and 1995, there was a dramatic surge in tourists to the pavilion around 23% to 48% but the figure plunged significantly in 2010 to 30%. Art
Add an article
The art
gallery
had the same trend, the Fix the agreement mistake
galleries
numbers
of visitors rose drastically in 1985 from 21% to 28% but it dropped below 9% in 2010. Fix the agreement mistake
number
In addition
, visitors to the festival fluctuated slightly between 1980 to 2010 from 30% to 28% and then
remained steadily
until 2010 Change the word
steady
approximately
28%. Change preposition
at approximately
Finally
, there was a fluctuation of
visitors to the pier from 1980 to 2005, after Change preposition
in
that
the figure had an upward trend Add a comma
,that
at
about 12% to 22% between 2000 and 2010.Change preposition
of
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