You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The line chart shows the proportion of tourists

visited

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who visited

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in

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apply

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many attraction sites in Brighton of England between 1980 and 2010. From the chart, we can see that

in

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from

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1980 to 2010, the most

favorite

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favourite

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site was the pavilion and the festival. In 1980 the pier was the least popular destination

while

the art gallery was the least attractive in 2010. During 1980 and 1995, there was a dramatic surge in tourists to the pavilion around 23% to 48% but the figure plunged significantly in 2010 to 30%.

Art

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The art

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gallery

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galleries

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had the same trend, the

numbers

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number

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of visitors rose drastically in 1985 from 21% to 28% but it dropped below 9% in 2010.

In addition

, visitors to the festival fluctuated slightly between 1980 to 2010 from 30% to 28% and

then

remained

steadily

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steady

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until 2010

approximately

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at approximately

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28%.

Finally

, there was a fluctuation

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in

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visitors to the pier from 1980 to 2005, after

that

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the figure had an upward trend

at

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of

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about 12% to 22% between 2000 and 2010.