The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram shows the design of a wave-energy

machine

and where to install it with two options for us to choose from. The

machine

's design is quite simple, and as shown in

such

design, the

machine

consists of a turbine and an electricity generator. Air is allowed to flow in and out of the

machine

to make it work properly. There are two options to locate a wave-energy

machine

with different pros and cons. Specifically, if we want the

machine

to produce a high output, we should install it where there are large

waves

that help make it generate more energy but the installation costs are quite high.

In contrast

, the installation costs can be reduced significantly if we have the

machine

installed where there are small

waves

This

option,

however

, can result in a low output as small

waves

are unable to help generate the amount of energy as much as the large

waves

do. In summary, whether the wave-energy

machine

is installed with high or low installation costs depends a great deal on our budget

as well as

the purposes of using

such

Add an article

the such

a such

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machine

Correct article usage

a machine

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Vocabulary: Replace the words machine, waves with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "waves" was used 4 times.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

186 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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