In the last 20 years there have been significant developments in the field of information technology (IT), for example, the World Wide Web and communication by email. However, future developments in IT are likely to have more negative effects than positive. To what extent do you agree with this view?

Now our century is during the developing. I want to emphasize that new machinery has changed not only our earth,

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for us. If compare our time with what was 20 years ago we have already become people Which can’t imagine their life without technology. I agree with the statement that development has more negative effects.

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of all there is plenty of reaction to health. Nowadays our children can’t refuse from social media, computer games, mobile phones. Statistics show us that people with eye problems are increased three times as much.

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has a psychological effect to all categories of people from toddlers to senior people. I think our contemporaries become lazier and more selfish,

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lso lots of teenagers feel themselves lonely.

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, it is a one of the main reasons for the pollution of our environment. In terms of industry automation has remarkable issues. Plenty of animals, plants

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our valuable lands are suffering from it. It’s seems to me that our green, clean nature becoming full of iron, metal world.

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I want to add we are becoming to victim of machinery. They don’t notice how rapidly time flies. We began to study with new technology, play with technological items, use technology products. They don’t aware what’s happening outside of automation. They don’t pay attention to their families, robots become friend for people. We have already changed our nature which remained from our ancestors. Beside of the good sides of machinery, there are more negative effects than positive. I can’t say nothing what will happen in the future if it continues to like peaches.