The bar chart below shows the total case of COVID-19 in ASEAN countries per 5 May 2020. The table displays how COVID-19 has affected three different regions in Indonesia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words

The bar chart below shows the total case of COVID-19 in ASEAN countries per 5 May 2020. The table displays how COVID-19 has affected three different regions in Indonesia.  Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant  Write at least 150 words
The bar chart below
illustrated
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the amount of total
cases
which happened in various
countries
in Southeast Asia
per
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5 May 2020. The
affect
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that COVID-19 has
caused
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to
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three different regions in
Indonesia
also
showed
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on
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the table.
Overall
,
countries
with the most infected
number
of people
is
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are
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mostly located in the south wing and
is
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contiguous with each other,
while
only a small amount of total
cases
are found in
countries
in the north wing. In
Indonesia
, the
number
of
cases
confirmed, recovered, and deaths was the highest among all the other regions. In
details
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, the
cases
of COVID-19 confirmed in Southeast Asia
is
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mostly found in Singapore, which has 19.351
cases
in total, followed by
Indonesia
, which is adjacent
with
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Singapore (11.396) and other
countries
such
as
Philippines
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the Philippines
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, Malaysia and Thailand.
However
, the
number
jumped down rapidly to only in hundreds in Vietnam (271
cases
), followed by Myanmar (165) and fell continuously to only 19
cases
in Laos, which became the least infected in ASEAN. In terms of detailed
cases
confirmed in
Indonesia
alone, the highest
number
was met in Jakarta with 4.539
cases
confirmed, 632
cases
recovered, and 408 deaths. In other West Java cities and East Java, there were slightly more than a thousand confirmed
cases
and more than a hundred
of
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recovered and death
cases
, except for West Java, which only has 86
cases
.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • COVID-19
  • ASEAN
  • cases
  • pandemic
  • affected regions
  • total cases
  • trends
  • increase
  • plateau
  • comparison
  • significance
  • patterns
  • healthcare facilities
  • population density
  • rapid growth
  • implications
  • region-specific details
  • bar chart
  • table
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