You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter • describe the situation • explain why you cannot continue at this time • say what action you would like to take

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letter to regard with I cannot continue my evening course since 6 May. I am hoping that you would allow me to continue with September 2020 and I will appreciate you if you freeze my lessons. The

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reason is that I Have been working with an IT company since 2019 as an assistant and I have some projects, my work demands more of my time. I have some deadlines and I will need to work a few extra hours each day.

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the beginning of June.

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from you soon. Yours sincerely, MS

Wed May 06 2020

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

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Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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