The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
The line graph compares the amount of
good
Correct your spelling
goods
transport
in four distinct modes in the UK from 1974 to 2002 via road
, water
, rail, and pipeline
. Overall
, road
infrastructure was the most efficient transportation and the efficiency increased over the period. While
pipeline
was the least favourable by the UK. The unit is measured in tons.
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the pipeline
To begin
with, in the initial year (1974), only a few UK people have
transferred merchandise via Unnecessary verb
apply
pipeline
. However
, nearly 40 million
tons were accounted for water
and railway transport
with slightly higher in
rail line popularity. The number almost doubled in Change preposition
apply
road
transportation and accounted for the highest popularity of the mode of transport
. In the following 8 years, pipeline
and water
gained in the number of users, whereas
a slight drop can be observed from road
and train users. In the year 1994, after the fluctuation in four modes of transport
, the number of infrastructure users was then
risen and accounted for just under 100 million
and 40 million
respectively. On the contrary
, after 1994, the quality of pipeline
remained Fix the agreement mistake
pipelines
exactly
20 Change preposition
at exactly
million
until 2002. While
, after the oscillation in water
transportation it, thenthen
reached just above 60 Correct your spelling
then then
million
in the final year.Submitted by weeracha.fern on
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