The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
The line graph compares the amount of
good
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transport
in four distinct modes in the UK from 1974 to 2002 via
road
,
water
, rail, and
pipeline
.
Overall
,
road
infrastructure was the most efficient transportation and the efficiency increased over the period.
While
pipeline
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was the least favourable by the UK. The unit is measured in tons.
To begin
with, in the initial year (1974), only a few UK people
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transferred merchandise via
pipeline
.
However
, nearly 40
million
tons were accounted for
water
and railway
transport
with slightly higher
in
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rail line popularity. The number almost doubled in
road
transportation and accounted for the highest popularity of the mode of
transport
. In the following 8 years,
pipeline
and
water
gained in the number of users,
whereas
a slight drop can be observed from
road
and train users. In the year 1994, after the fluctuation in four modes of
transport
, the number of infrastructure users was
then
risen and accounted for just under 100
million
and 40
million
respectively.
On the contrary
, after 1994, the quality of
pipeline
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remained
exactly
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20
million
until 2002.
While
, after the oscillation in
water
transportation it,
thenthen
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then then
reached just above 60
million
in the final year.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Transported goods
  • Quantities
  • Trends
  • Modes of transport
  • Rail
  • Road
  • Water
  • Pipeline
  • Fluctuations
  • Predominance
  • Economic influences
  • Societal changes
  • Technological advancements
  • Environmental impact
  • Growth
  • Steady increase/decrease
  • Comparison
  • Period (e.g., decade, years)
  • Examination
  • Implications
  • Analysis
  • Conclusion
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