Science tells us some activities are good for our health and there are some unhealthy activities. But millions of people still do those unhealthy activities. Why? What can we do to change this situation?
There are various benefits
in
having a healthy lifestyle, and almost all adults recognize Suggestion
of
this
as common sense. However
, a large group of people persist
in doing unhealthy activities.
I, Suggestion
persists
personally believe
that resulting in Accept comma addition
personally, believe
this
kind of trend is mainly due to the rapid development of modern society, which leads an uneasy atmosphere. Compared with people from rural area, city residents have faced more pressure especially
those who work in Accept comma addition
pressure, especially
metropolis
. Suggestion
the metropolis
Therefore
, some unhealthy activities such
as alcoholism, smoking and even drugs have become them an outlet which can instantly but
briefly relieve them from Accept comma addition
instantly, but
painfulness
in reality. For Suggestion
the painfulness
this
kind of unhealthy activities, people do not need to invest too much energy to get the maximum release comparing
to gym activities. Suggestion
comparable
Moreover
, unhealthy diets are also
listed into unhealthy activities. Canned and bottled food, for example
, have probably become
Suggestion
has probably become
priority
for those civil servants or other occupations whose busy lifestyle, because they have not enough time to prepare lunches or dinners. Suggestion
a priority
In addition
, due to the popularity of the internet and the developments of the computers, an increasing number of people are willing to choose the new kind of entertainments--- e-sports. I do not think that it will be help
for people’s health, which just another term of Suggestion
a help
sedentary lifestyle
.
Several measures can be taken to change Suggestion
a sedentary lifestyle
this
situation. Firstly
, the employees’ salary should be increased proportionally through the government’s support, as main cause
of stress mainly come from insufficient wages. Suggestion
the main cause
Secondly
, the government should allocate money to build public areas such
as parks and basketball courts, residents obtain various options to unwind.
In conclusion, some people find it difficult to change their lifestyles and some habits are a result of stresses
of modern life. The government has a vital role to play in dealing with Suggestion
the stresses
this
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