The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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male and female Correct word choice
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readers
in Burnaby Public Library between 2011 and 2014.
In 2011, the number of woman’s
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readers
made up nearly 5.000 books
, which were higher 1.500 than that of
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books
more than men, the rate of them read
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, while
the figure for men was 3.900 books
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By 2013, both gender figures increased significantly and were similar to each other, at around 10.000 books
. Additionally
, the reverse pattern was seen in 2014 when the proportion of female readers
dropped dramatically by 8.000 books
, there was a sharp upward trend of figure for male readers
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