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Some people have the same type of job throughout their lifetime, while others prefer to change the type of job they do. Discuss why people choose to do both and give your opinion.

#people #type #job #lifetime #change
It is believed by a few individuals are comfortable with doing the same
work
 in their whole
time
 of the period, whereas others consider to keep changing and preparing them self to experiment for change the jobs and try to grow in their
career
 by learning new things and improving the skills to enhance the knowledge. In
this
 contemporary era, there are lots of competition and challenges to get into a new job, whereas everyone is looking for better opportunity and
career
, so people believed to learn new things and keep learning and improve their skills
time
 to
time
 in order to enter in
next level
Suggestion
the next level
. Learning is always better and if it's helping to move out in other higher levels or enhancing the
career
. As per the previous studies those people keep learning new things and involving them self for helping others and learning from them, they got faster growth, and whereas those who are not ready to learn and happy to
work
 the same type of job get less growth in
career
.
On the contrary
, some other group of people are happy to
work
 the same type of job for whole
life
 as they become masters by doing it the same
work
 again and again, once they got used of it and after certain
time
 of period they did not willing to change their jobs and spent complete
life
 in the same profile by doing the same
work
 and they
also
 enjoy their
work
 and because they are masters in the particular segment, they got 99 % accuracy in
work
 and the company
also
 obliged to these workers and keep increasing salaries and supporting every level of
life
. To conclude
this
, people those are ready to learn any age and looking for growth in
life
 and new opportunities. They definitely ready to learn new things any
time
 and whereas other those are not interested to enter into any kind of learning and development in them self, would be doing it the same kind of
work
 and happy with the same.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Job security
  • Stability
  • Expertise
  • Mastery
  • Career advancement
  • Personal growth
  • Development
  • Acquiring
  • Skills
  • Knowledge
  • Exploring
  • Career paths
  • Opinion
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