The line graph show of amount of carbon dioxide emissions in 1976 to 2007 in four countries united Kingdom, Sweden Italy and Portugal.

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The given line graph represents a comparison

among

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four countries.

unitedkingdom

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united kingdom

UnitedKingdom

, Sweden, Italy and Portugal on the basis of

average

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amount of

carbon

dioxide

emission per person from

1976to

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1976 to

2007.the data has been calibrated in terms of metric terms.

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the

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carbon

dioxide

emission decreased in Sweden and the United Kingdom

while

that rose in Italy and Portugal over the time period. Now, turning towards the details of

carbon

dioxide

emissions per person in the United Kingdom.it started from 11 metric

tonnes

in 1987.

andit

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and it

was

highest

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amount among

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countries.in the

decade,it declined slightly but in the

three decades,it decreased rapidly to nearly 8 metric

tonnes

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, as for as

Sweden

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carbon

dioxide

emissions were concerned.

intitialy

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initially

it was recorded at 8 metric

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but increased fastly in

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years.

moreover

, Italy was

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third

position in 1967 and it was noticed at 4 metric

tonnes

but after ten years,it increased slightly and it was near about 8 metric

tonnes

after which it gradually increased.the country of Portugal which followed an upward trend

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all

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remained at the least position always. So,a significant variation has been recorded

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Some people think that to learn about other countries, they need to travel. Some say that it is not necessary to travel; we can have information through TV and Internet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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