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More and more students at university today are not choosing to study science. Why is this happening? What are the effects of this?

#students #university #study #science #effects
Beyond doubt,
science
 is considered as a one of crucial subjects at
high education place
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the higher education place
higher education place
.
However
, some students are
willing take
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willing, take
this
 subject from school curriculum due to reasons. And I do believe that there are several factors influencing and would be discussed above. On the one hand, there are a few reasons for
this
 statement.
Firstly
, in our modern society we are highly recommended to choose not only well
paid but
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paid, but
also
 modest, highly demanded and appreciated jobs that helps us to build up
strong and reliable career
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a strong and reliable career
 in labour market by do not
getting
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get
 educated about
science
.
In addition
 to
this
, as we all know
science
 subject included astronomy, biology and others which is hard to learn and concentrate on, so
our
plural of "I"
we
 offsprings do not have patient to get
updated
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updates
 about
this subjects
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this subject
these subjects
.
On the other hand
,
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,
there will be consequent effects that should be taken into account.
Initially
, by do not
learning
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learn
this
 essential
subjects
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subject
 our young generation becomes illiterate,
consequently
 they have no idea what to say when are asked about those subjects.
Additionally
,
this
 can cause lost
of
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on
this
subjects
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subject
 and would become
rare which
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rare, which
 means no one is literate about
this
 and we are expected to witness dying out of
employees
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the employees
 of
this
subjects
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subject
. To sum up, have evaluated of both aspects I am of the opinion that, the
science
 and included subjects had better to be educated in university and I believe
this
subjects
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subject
 can come in handy in certain occasions in their life,
otherwise
 we are predicted to face with serious problems mentioned above.

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