Many students around the world don’t choose science subjects at university. Give the reasons for this and describe the impact on the community?

With the improvement of economic level, the Internet and information technology are increasingly affecting people's lives, not only making life more intelligent and information-based, but
also
providing people with a variety of
convenience
Suggestion
conveniences
. In the era of increasing popularity of the Internet,
e-commerce
enterprises emerge as the times require. Their emergence has subverted people's previous
life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
and trading mode. As the favourite of the new era, in the process of its operation and development,
e-commerce
enterprises should not only have enterprise strategies that conform to the development trend of the times, but
also
have practical and reasonable plans to implement tasks at different levels in order to achieve strategic objectives. A performance evaluation system is needed to connect the business results of enterprises with strategic objectives.
This
paper adopts the balanced scorecard Methods, taking Jingdong group as an example,
this
paper studies the business performance of Listed Companies in the
e-commerce
industry, and tries to find a more healthy and sustainable development mode through the performance evaluation of Listed Companies in the
e-commerce
industry.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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