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A lot of students find it difficult to write good essays. There is little that you can do to make your essays better or to the job easier. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, almost every university
require
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requires
is requiring
 the
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the estimate
. Writing good quality of
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 is quite
difficult especially
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difficult, especially
 for ESL students. In my opinions, there
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 a lot of solutions to improve writing skill including practising and putting effort.
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one solution that
 could help every
students
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student
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become
 more confident
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in
of
about
 their writing. In the present, there are many websites that include writing task and show some of
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an
 IELTS-exam when I was 15 years old. I tried to research the website which
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provides
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students especially
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students, especially
 ESL student
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has
 to do a lot of writing tasks to improve their essays. Some of them are not happy with their
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 time and give up to upgrade their essays. I could suggest that whatever your
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essay
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 daily and learn from your mistake. To sum up,
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score
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 in writing exam, you need to keep a lot of practising and putting your effort.
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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