In many countries, tourism is a major part of the economy, but it also causes environmental damage and ruins the places it exploits. It is argued that tourists should pay an additional tax to compensate for this damage. Do you agree?

In the past two
decades there
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decades, there
has been an influx in the number of people who are able to travel to places of interest and beauty. One of the consequences of
this
has been that the locations these tourists visit
have been spoiled
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has been spoiled
and even destroyed. I am of the opinion that tourists should pay a charge to repair the damage they bring
about but
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about, but
feel that those responsible for looking after tourist attractions should
also
play their part in caring for them. I support the practice of requiring visitors to help those who are responsible for maintaining tourist attractions with a monetary payment. When a town,
city
or place of beauty receives thousands of visitors every year the cost of,
for instance
, cleaning, disposal of rubbish, an increased number of staff and provision of services can be high, which places a strain on budgets.
This
is largely because the income
that is
at the disposal of, say, a town’s management is limited to what is made available from the taxes citizens pay. Venice charges all tourists an entrance fee to the
city
, which mitigates to some extent the impact of its millions of visitors annually, but has so far failed to fully protect
this
city
from those who come to enjoy it.
This
is a good example of why other strategies need to be adopted. More can be done than just collecting fees from visitors. For any tourist destination to continue to be viable, not only for visitors, but
also
for those who live there or nearby, there must be a clear policy set and funded by central government in consultation with town or
city
councils as to how
this
rapidly increasing influx of visitors is going to be managed. In Germany,
for instance
, Berlin had the backing of the national government to control the letting of apartments through Airbnb so that owners of property in the
city
were only permitted to let out
singLe
being or characteristic of a single thing or person
single
singles
shingle
apartments within their homes rather than their whole house.
This
had two positive effects: the price of accommodation for Berliners was kept at an affordable level and visitors to the
city
had the experience of living with a local. In conclusion, the growing numbers of tourists travelling the world is
producing
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produced
problems
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Problems
to which there are no easy answers. One welcome strategy has been to
charge
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Charge
tourists a visitor fee, but I believe closer cooperation between central
government
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Government
and those who are responsible for managing matters on the ground
would
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Would
prove productive.
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