Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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crime

is the significant play role behind

lack

of few things

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which is unnecessary and

some times

on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always

sometimes

it creates

major issue

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a major issue

major issues

in routine life.A group of people think that when the culprit come back from

jail

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jail, then

then

they become absolutely good residents, whereas believe that these people are

the great

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the greatest

to say to adolescent about their dangerous progress and describe a

crime

and I agree with

this

second

statement.

Firstly

, I would like to talk about wrong

doer

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doing

, they are the best because when creates

crime

after victim is

lack

of skills, technology, and

lack

of good education.Thug

are known

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is known

their

jail

life because in

jail

are comfort zone for them.

but

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But

our rules and regulations are more far away to other foreign countries.

so

to a very great extent or degree

So

crime

rates highly increased day by day

,

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,

although

people have been preferred to

crime

because they have some

lack

of confidence

on

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in

about

themselves.

Secondaly

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Secondly

,

first

and

more clear

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most clear

crime

rates

do not stop

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have not stopped

nowadays, but aware must be necessary for adults.Because non educated people choose to

crime

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criminalize

behind of moneys problem and many more things.

when

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When

wrong doers create a

crime but

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crime, but

they do not know about

jail

life and

some

one or some or every or all without specification

any

rules and regulations of courts

,

Accept space

,

despite of

they

objective case of they

them

ready for

crime

.Buy they completed 5

years

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years'

time periods in

jail

Accept comma addition

jail, then

then

they wake up some teenagers, so its beneficial for others. In conclusion, after some things are depends on our thinks, but I really appreciate about offender because while they gives some important information to teenagers and describe their

offense

a lack of politeness; a failure to show regard for others; wounding the feelings or others

offence

office

and I think it must be necessary for adults.

after

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After

they can not thinks how to take benefit of

crime

?

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?

What

happend

come to pass

happened

??

so

to a very great extent or degree

So

crime

creares

make or cause to be or to become

creates

major issues for everyone.I do not think about thug, when they back to home after they serious, and

also

better than before, it is impossible as per my view.