The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2010 and 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts
bellow
illustrates the information, about the online shopping Correct your spelling
below
sales
for retail sectors in New Zealand in the period from 2010 till
2030.
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to
Overall
, what stands out from the graph that
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is that
sales
of travel accounted for the highest percentage of all years and all sales
it is 36%.
However
, this
will decrease significantly in percentage from
2010 and 2030. The travel Change preposition
between
sales
section, on the contrary
, will grow from 21 per cent to 33 per cent, which puts them in second
place among the main sales
.
Book sales
will not change much, up just two percent
in 20 years.Online Change the spelling
per cent
sales
for clothes
retail sector will decrease by about 8 Correct article usage
the clothes
percent
for the period from 2010 to 2030 Change the spelling
per cent
that
will be the lowest percentage of Correct pronoun usage
which
sales
, only 16%. In total, it turns out that online sales
of books and films will increase. While
rental sectors of clothing and travel sales
will fall.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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