Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?

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experts,

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leisure

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the leisure time

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of children plays an important role in their overall

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as it is the

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when the students can explore things outside their books.

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, some believe that even during

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free,

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pupils must engage in activities which are educational or else their free

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will not be productive. In my opinion,

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assertion is completely wrong as there are many other ways,

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as playing outdoor games with friends or playing in the park

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, which are more productive and beneficial for the

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. A young

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’s brain is in its early stages of

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and

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many presume that if children indulge in educational activities outside the school, it would help develop their cognitive ability. In a

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, it is effective, as it helps the

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train his brain to grasp or learn things faster and more easily.

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, playing games which involve performing simple mathematical operations using a physical number line, has proven to benefit the young get better at number calculations.

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, it is not the only

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,

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playing indoor games or performing indoor activities deprives the students from learning necessary social skills and

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it is not an effective

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through which they can achieve an overall

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. Since students spend almost a quarter of their day studying in school and another 3 to 4 hours doing homework, making them perform educational

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activities would be unfair.

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, apart from their mental growth, children should

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develop their bodies by performing some physical activities outdoors.

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ensures an overall

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of the

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. Performing physical activities outdoors like playing in the park, or participating in football matches

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teaches them important social skills,

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team work.

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allowing students outdoors and making them perform physical activities is the most effective

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to ensure an overall

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of the

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. In conclusion, making children's

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time

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educational

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education

is not the right approach for a complete

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. The best approach is to allow the students to play outdoors and indulge them in team sports.

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Hence, in

my opinion, children's

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activities must not be made educational as non-educational activities have greater positive impacts on

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child's growth

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a child's growth

the child's growth

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