Recently published figures show that the wildlife population around the world has decreased by around fifty percent over the last fifty years. What can we do to help protect the wildlife around the world?

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New number of reports has
declare
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declared
that the inhabitant of undomesticated animal species around the globe has been decline
to
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of
one-half over the
last
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fifty years.
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, organising a group of people as a committee to kick against animal
cruelty
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and planting of trees can put an end to endangering the life of wild animals across the society. There are major challenges facing the wildlife
community
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as of today, while
this
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has been a huge problem across the globe, there are possible ways to shield them from danger.
Firstly
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, organising some group of people as a Committee to kick against animal
cruelty
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and provided that there will be a grave punishment for any offenders. I believe
this
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act would assist in shielding the wild animal around the planet.
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, the set of committees should
also
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organise a sensitization programme to create awareness to the
community
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, on how to stop the killing of undomesticated animal specie across the
community
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.
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instance in
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instance, in
southern part
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the southern part
of Nigeria, some set of individuals
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is known
to feed on
wild animal
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wild animals
,
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as elephant, sea turtle and so on.
This
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practice was
curb
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curbed
with the help of some organisations present in the
community
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to educate the people against animal
cruelty
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.
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Another way to help prevent the
world
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world's
animal population
in
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from
going extinct is by planting trees,
this
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will help to provide shelter for them, and it
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also provide
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also provides
natural foods for wildlife.
First
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example, Favour trees and shrubs
provides
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provide
heavy seed berry and fruit producing species
for
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of
animal to feed on. Having a safe place to stay and good food would go a long way in protecting wildlife across the globe. To sum up, Providing a group of people to help in educating the society to kick against animal
cruelty
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and encourage growing of plants and trees, in other to protect the population and increase the lifespan of wild animals.

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