The table below shows the table made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The table depicts the number of items which
is
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
selling
in the cafeteria located at the office building particularly on weekdays from morning to till evening.
The morning time is Wrong verb form
sold
well known
Add a hyphen
well-known
famous
for pastries in the Correct word choice
and famous
coffee
shop because it almost counts to
275, the Change preposition
apply
count
has become low during the evening. Followed by a coffee
shop, but it has some changes as the most sell
Replace the word
sales
at
Change preposition
in
morning
tally to 265 and the ratio Correct article usage
the morning
become
marginally down till late afternoon and Correct subject-verb agreement
becomes
then
the night is very popular for coffee
.
Tea is considered as
the least among all others, particularly in selling Change preposition
apply
count
. From morning to evening, the count
is tapering off to almost 110 to 75. The sandwiches are as much as
better than tea, it shows some decrement and increment throughout the day especially Change preposition
apply
the
peak time is noted as early afternoon.
Correct word choice
since the
Overall
, the morning schedule time is famous for coffee
, pastries and tea because it shows the highest count
rather than other timing. Sandwiches are particularly famous in the early afternoon.Submitted by r.menaka.m on
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