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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words.

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In our modern life you cannot do anything in an individual
plan
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 to achieve that goal, So you have to be in a
band
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 or to let a big
band
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 make that goal
instead
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 of you. The chance of achieving the goal is so neat to be if a
band
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 decides to do it.
That is
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 our topic today. We have many companies in our capital city that can do a
lot
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 of projects in a successful
plan
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 and help the society to be more comfortable. Eventually, It totally depends on how much the governments and companies have their ambition to achieve that goal.
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, We have in the middle east so many successful companies that can do lots of projects and in a better
plan
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 that you can do it in an individual
plan
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 for yourself, because they have a
lot
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 of techniques, materials, many people and so on features that can help them more than you as individual one. One of the most important companies is AL- AMANY company
band
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 that has a
lot
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 of successful projects, It has actually achieved it in a completely
plan
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 and has helped many many people.
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, In every country they have a
government
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, So I think in my opinion each
government
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 has all the abilities to achieve and do every project to help people to live more comfortably than previous years. Even if it takes a
lot
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 of money as a cost of these projects. China as an example of the great
government
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 that helps their people to live more comfortable and made a
lot
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 of projects
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 as the houses as a shape of triangle
plan
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 help them to see their environment clearly,
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 they
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 can achieve a
lot
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, still think of new projects and think how to improve the mobile phones to help millions of people all over the world.
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, my main aim of
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 essay to help more people with a good
plan
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. Do not forget that individuals cannot achieve a
lot
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 like the groups,
such
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 as the important companies as a private
plan
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Also we
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Also, we
 must be in touch with the
government
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 that help us to achieve a
lot
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 of projects make our life is so good. So actually Working with groups is more benefit than individuals to achieve goals.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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