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You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: • explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months • say how your work could be done while you are away • ask for his/her help in arranging it, You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir, I am writing to let you know that I am very interested to spend six months working
in
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 our head office in Germany. I have been part of
Product
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 management Team
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 2 years and working closely with our team in Germany. The head office
have
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 recently implemented a new ERP System. The basic objective of my trip to Germany would be to learn the functioning of
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 ERP system.
Moreover
, the company has launched new products and I would like to get in hands experience. I have a discussion with laveen and he agreed to take up my responsibilities during my absence.
Furthermore
, I will check my emails regularly and would be available for emergency phone calls. Once I get back to
office
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, I would work extra hours in order to catch up on anything I missed. Would you kindly approve
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 Thank you for your help and support. Yours faithfully, Harpreet

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professional development
  • global operations
  • cross-functional
  • remote work
  • progress updates
  • logistical arrangements
  • cultural exchange
  • continuity plan
  • enhance my skillset
  • broaden my horizons
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