The diagram illustrates the basic principles of a hydraulic dam.The process includes a large dam,powerhouse and long distance power lines.

The diagram illustrates the basic principles of a hydraulic dam.The process includes a large dam,powerhouse and long distance power lines.
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, electricity production from the hydroelectric dam is a complex process and it needs various equipment as well. At first,the water is collected in the reservoir behind the dam,
then
it is forced through an intake.the intake is connected to along narrow channel called
penstock
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,
and
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which is extended to a machine called
turbine
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a turbine
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.The
turbine
has many leaves .The pressure of the water increases when it is forced through the penstock ,
then
it rotates the leaves of the
turbine
.the
turbine
is connected to a huge generator ,which is located in the powerhouse. The generator
produce
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electricity when the
turbine
rotates .After
that
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the generated power passes through different areas with the help of
long distance
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power lines.The production of hydroelectricity is a natural process and it does not harm the environment .In the final stage ,the remaining water flows out through a
second
channel and into a river.
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, these all are the different stages involved in the principles of
hydroelectric
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a hydroelectric
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dam.
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