Last month you had a holiday overseas where you staid with some friends. They have just send you some photos of your holiday. Write a later to your friends. In your letter: thank them for the photos and for the holiday explain why you did not write earlier invite them to come and with you

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Dear Andy and Sally I am writing you to thank for photos which you sent me

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week. I was over the moon to get

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. I am very sorry about not writing you earlier. While I was looking at

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, I remember all our good days on holiday. Do you remember our trip to the island Toko. Andy was very happy to visit

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island. It was the best day in my whole life. Thank you two for

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amazing holiday. I hope that someday we will go on holidays together again. I was very busy

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month, so that I did not have time to write you. I hope that you are good. I would be very grateful if you could come to me

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weekend. I am ready to show you all beautiful places in my city. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. All the best. Your Alexa.

Sun May 10 2020

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Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Sentence 2 - Example
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

154 words

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