In many countries smoking is now illegal in public places, Many people believe that such a ban is justified do you agree or disagree?

The status of illegal activity assigned to smoking in public has developed some criticism but

also

approvement

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improved

improvement

. On one

hand there

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hand, there

are those who support

such

choice,

on the other

hand some

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hand, some

people claim that

this

is not fair. In my opinion,

this

ban can only benefit people's health when they are

outdoor

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outdoors

. It is claimed that passive smoking is far more dangerous than the 'active smoking'.

Wherease

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Whereas

in the private people can breath their own smoking, in public many people should be

feel

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feeling

safe to be not exposed to the risks caused by passive smokers. An evidence for

this

is that people who normally don't smoke can suffer from lung cancer. Public health should be preserved from the consequences of smoking.

In addition

to

this

, toxic substances released

in

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into

the air by smokers can affect

different kind

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different kinds

of people outdoor as pregnant women, children or patients with breathing problems. For

this

reason, smoking in public would be a real

threath both

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treat, both

treat both

threat both

truth both

for healthy people and for those who already suffer from a disease. The threat to public health is a serious matter. To sum up, the illegality of smoking in public should be supported because of the serious consequences it brings to the

individual's

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individual

organism. The choice of the smokers cannot be imposed to the collectivity.