Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Other disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is considered by some people that tourists should respect local customs and traditions, while others are against because they think that countries should be open to cultural differences. The

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point of view it’s argued for the reason that religion or laws in some nations are very strict, whereas the

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it’s believed because we are in the globalized world,

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we have to be

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tolerated

tolerant

. In my opinion, I agree with foreign follow local customs, because

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can avoid that we happen bad moments. Nowadays, all places

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the earth

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trough globalization, which has helped to zoom distances and open our minds. Actually, some academics suggest that the earth is flat, for the reason that everybody have similar behaviour and rules.

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, with

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I travel to another country and I have the same traditions that in my nation, I shouldn’t have any problem, due to

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could give a kind of

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wealth

for the place that I am visiting.

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, despite we are in a globalized world, not all nations are willing to know foreign customs, so for avoiding problems is better follow local rules.

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, middle east is controlled by Muslims, who are very strict with women, so if you are a woman the best way to

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a safe travel is

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respected, their

norms, if you don’t want to finish in prison or raped, for showing the same

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parts that show in your country. In conclusion, I believe that we have to respect local customs and traditions of

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the places

we are

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visiting

. Today

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information about local behaviour and what rules they are following. So

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the best

is that we have tolerance

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way we can avoid a lot of trouble when we travel.