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Ensuring that children have regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of parents and therefore schools should not waste valuable school time having sports lessons as part of the curriculum. To what extent do you agree.

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In modern day
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people seek to be healthy
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so they should take up
sport
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a sport
 or physical exercises.Some people think that school teachers must not spend
them
of them or themselves
their
 time to organise
PE
 and parents should arrange these exercises.While
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
 consider that teachers ought to arrange
PE
.
This
 essay agrees with
this
 opinion
First
 of all
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If teachers organise physical
exersices
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercises
exercise
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it will help to pupils.
This
 is because physical exercises make pupils more cheerful and more active.
For example
, if pupils are sleepy
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PE
help
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helps
 them to be cheerful
Secondly
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taking up
sport
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the sport
is strengthen
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is strengthening
has strengthened
is strengthened
strengthens
 them health.
As
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A's
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taking up exercises develop pupil's body
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power
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endurance
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speed and etc.
For instance
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if pupils take up jogging
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them endurance will develop.
Moreover
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if they do pull ups or push ups
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they improve
them
of them or themselves
their
 power
Thus
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if parents make an effort to
this
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pupils will develop much faster In conclusion
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i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 consider that teacher should arrange
PE and
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PE, and
 if they do
this
 together with pupil's parents
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it will be much more effective.As taking up sport makes them more active and healhier

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