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Many employers find that their new employees lack sufficient interpersonal skills such as a lack of ability to work with colleagues as a team. What are the causes? Can you suggest some possible solutions?

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New employees are believed by employers to have not enough interpersonal skills,
such
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 as collaboration, which are very important during the
work
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 with colleagues. Despite the fact that newcomers often face
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 a problem, there are several ways that can help newcomers learn the skills of cooperation and teamwork.
To begin
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 with, when individuals come to
work
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 for the
first
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 time, they are not always able to get used quickly to the new workplace and staff. In
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 cases, people usually feel uncomfortable and
unconfident
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 because they are scared of the unknown and colleagues’ perceptions.
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, most of all they are intimidated by the possibility of making a mistake and being condemned by all other workers.
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 is because of the fact they do not know how their colleagues will behave or react in a particular situation.
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, it becomes difficult for newcomers
to collaborate
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collaborate
 with others, especially in a team.
Although
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 the problem is psychological and does not seem easy to be overcome, there are effective ways how to solve it. Today, the Internet is full of advertisements with a variety of training,
masterclasses
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 and courses, including those which can help people cultivate the qualities necessary for successful teamwork,
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 as sociability, responsibility, organization,
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. These trainings give people advice on how to find common ground with colleagues and become more confident.
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, they teach individuals how to stop being afraid to express their own opinion and be able to accept the opinions of others. As a conclusion, the main problem that almost all new employees face is a lack of interpersonal skills,
such
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 as the ability to
work
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 with colleagues as a team.
However
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, despite
this
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, there are different ways to solve
this
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 issue. One of the most effective is attending special trainings and
masterclasses
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 which teach people to develop skills they need for successful
work
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 with the staff and in the team.

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