The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents.
The chart presented the number of journeys
with
Change preposition
by
car
Add an article
the car
a car
in to
the Join the words
into
city
centre by residents
and non-
residents
between 1996 to 2005. Overall
, this
graph is shown residents
and non-
residents
decreased go
into the Wrong verb form
going
city
by car
year to year. For example
, Ten thousand residents
by car
journey into the city
in 1996, over
4000 Correct word choice
and over
residents
went into the city
by car
in 2004. Between 1999 to 2002, more than 8,000 non-
residents
stably travelled into the city
by car
, whereas
this
number got the lowest point is 3000 to 4000 residents
. We can see residents
actively travelled into the city
by car
from 1996 to 1999, however
from 2000 that’s
number sharply declined.The data clearly shows both Unnecessary verb
that
residents
and non-
residents
went into the city
approximately 4000 a
per day for three years.Correct article usage
apply
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Vocabulary: Replace the words car, city, residents, non-residents with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 2 times.
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