The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents.

The chart presented the number of journeys

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car

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the car

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the

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centre by

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and

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between 1996 to 2005.

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graph is shown

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and

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decreased

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into the

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year to year.

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, Ten thousand

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journey into the

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in 1996,

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4000

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went into the

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in 2004. Between 1999 to 2002, more than 8,000

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stably travelled into the

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,

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number got the lowest point is 3000 to 4000

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. We can see

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actively travelled into the

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from 1996 to 1999,

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from 2000

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number sharply declined.The data clearly shows both

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and

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went into the

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approximately 4000

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per day for three years.