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Celebrities make a very good living out of media attention and have chosen to live in the public spot light. They have no right to complain when they feel the media are intruding on their privacy. To what extent do you agree and disagree with this opinion.

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To gain popularity, Public figures choose to remain in
highlight
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high light
.
Although
 they can afford
good lifestyle
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a good lifestyle
 by living
simple
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simply
, attention seekers later complain about their
privacy
 being hampered by mass and media. Whatever the case may be, but
privacy
 is utmost personal and I support my view towards it.
Firstly
, every individual on earth has a right of
privacy
. Many celebrities choose to live
normal outside their
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outside their normal
 work schedules. Being entertaining to viewers, VIP’s are
also
an
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a
 human being. For an example of actors, Amitabh Bachchan a renowned actor, after work schedule gives time for his family and
grand children
a child of your son or daughter
grandchildren
. He may not love to discuss about his personal life with everyone,
this
 is a case in point.
Nonetheless
, another
person
 to highlight from theatres, is Salman
khan
a title given to rulers or other important people in Asian countries
Khan
. He runs
a
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an
 NGO, after his clock timings, and he may not be happy to share with others. I believe he should be honoured for his work not for his personal life.
Secondly
, not every
person
 is same as seen on screen or play on
grounds
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the grounds
.
Audience
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The audience
 starts believing the actors as they play
role
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a role
roles
the role
 in films.
This
 applies to all categories of important persons. These include sports
person
, entrepreneurs, and many. Self stand
alone
Accept comma addition
alone, person
person
 shares only visible life with others, they hide the truth behind them of helping others.
Such
 as Ambani’s runs Hospitals and Schools whereas not to be missed are TATA’s aiding support
to
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for
of
government
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the government
 during pandemic situations. Saurav Ganguly successfully a sports
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
 for economically less. I feel
privacy
 is of utmost importance, which these celebrities needs. To sum up, I would request
government
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the government
 to legalize law for freedom of
privacy
. I do understand about
plnaks
a stout length of sawn timber; made in a wide variety of sizes and used for many purposes
planks
 played by important persons to remain in public, still
Privacy
 should not be compromised at any cost.

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