Some people think that the role of parents is to discipline their children and teach them about the right and wrong. Other people consider the main responsibility of the parent is to nurture their children and provide them with a safe environment to grow up in. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Parenting is the important responsibility
for
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of
every parent to give a beautiful and mature life for their child. Their upbringing leads the future of the children. The parents are the main root who implant a nice character, moral and ethical value in their children to make them a better human being. There are two types of parents are in the
society
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. The
first
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one, are those who taught about the importance of discipline and manners. The infants
are like a wet clay and parents are
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are like a wet clay and parents being
are like a wet clay and parents are
like a potter. They can give any shape to their children and they will adapt easily. If the parent makes chaos inside the family the children will learn it and will do the same. The children who grown up by seeing fights and sulks in between the parents are
feel
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feeling
themselves less confident and insecure in the
society
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. So, the parent should take care of it very
precisely
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precise
and one small flaw can misguide a child. They have
to
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
strict with discipline and give the knowledge about right and wrong in the family and for the
society
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. The
second
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are those who nurture their children in multi dimension that they can adapt themselves
in
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to
the any circumstances of the life. These parents believe that by taking over care makes the children weak and hollow for inside.
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, they
are always rely
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are always relying
always rely
are always relied
have always relied
upon the parents due to inability to take right decisions alone. So, the parents should give them
opportunity
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the opportunity
an opportunity
to learn from self-mistakes and make them correct with own intellectuals. And
this
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is very important because parents are not available all the time to protect them. In the summary, I would like to conclude
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both type parents are important for upbringing of the child. Because without discipline we cannot be an ideal person of the
society
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and without self- knowledge cannot think about the betterment of
own
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ownership
or the community.

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