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Some film companies spend millions of dollars on the production of a single movie. Is it necessary to spend a lot of money to make a good movie? What factors contribute to the success of a movie?

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These
days
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day
 cinema industries are giving many of blockbuster successful movies. They spend millions of dollars to make a successful
movie
. But it doesn’t need to spend millions to make a
movie
 successful, it is possible to make a good
movie
 even in low
budget
 and make it profitable. For a successful
movie it
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movie, it
 requires some certain elements.
Firstly
, a film needs
audience
 attention to make it commercially successful.
In other words
, it required coherence of fears, mysteries, some drama to make
audience
 humorous and an emotional attachment with the characters. So, they can feel their involvement in the
movie
. The script writer and the director play a very important role to select the character to match with the script. If only famous actors take the key roles, the
audience
come only to see
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only comes to see
comes only to see
 their favourite stars. With the aggressive advertisement, promotions and publicity can make
movie
 hit and make a good
profit but
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profit, but
 it is not sure that
movie
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the movie
 will successful and nominated for prestigious like Oscar and others. The
movie like
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movie, like
 Life of Pie, actor Irfan Khan who did remarkable role and an extraordinary work of all the other characters in the
movie
 nominated for Oscar. Though the
movie
 was low
budget
 and not used fancy technologies,
nevertheless
 it is praised by
audience
 and
also
 create a record business having low
budget
. In summary, a filmmaker
often rely
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often relies
 on stars and latest expensive technologies to make their
movie
 profitable and successful. But a filmmaker can make a low
budget
movie
 with proper content, selection of character who fits in the role and a mesmerising script which leads the
movie
 towards the prestigious awards
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