Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is irrefutable that no one left behind in

this

competitive era

,

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,

and

every one

all people

everyone

strive

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strives

to

gives

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give

cutthroat competition to each other for

better life

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a better life

.

However

, supermarkets

also

not left in

this

competition, and due to the development and rapid expansion of

supermaket

a large self-service grocery store selling groceries and dairy products and household goods

supermarkets

,

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,

local trader become unable to compete them

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,

and it is often argued that due to the closure of small local

bussiness

a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it

businesses

business

which effect

to

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on

the local communities

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,

and it may become reason of the death of local people. I completely disagree with

this

statement.In

this

essay,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

will explain reason to uphold my

view duly

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view, duly

arguments and based on

i

of me or myself

my

I

will derive a conclusion. According to the

some

closely similar or comparable in kind or quality or quantity or degree

same

opponents,

supermarket

inextricably effect to the life of local people.

First

of all, local people are not able to buy from the

supermarket

.

This

is because they belong to middle class family and they always deem to purchase from

local

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local stores

a local store

store

insted

in place of, or as an alternative to

instead

of supermart.

As a result

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rapid expansion of big mall it badly effect to the life of local

store

and local people.

However

,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

deem that

super market

a large self-service grocery store selling groceries and dairy products and household goods

supermarket

is not effected to the local

bussiness

a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it

business

businesses

and local layman.

firstly

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Firstly

,

supermarket

gives lots of benefits as well discount in shopping.

This

is because they

also

do collaboration with

local trader

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local traders

a local trader

, and they give a chance to sell their products in

super market

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the supermarket

supermarket

supermarkets

a supermarket

. Not only...

but

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But

also

they make a sell in every month, and it is affordable to middle class family.

Consequently

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people get a

lots

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lot

of benefits and discount from the one place.

For instance

, according to the survey of times of

india

a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947

India

, more than 65% of local people like

to purchased

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to purchase

the item from the

supermarket

among

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between

2017-20 because they got a lot of benefits and discount from there. In recapitulation,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

strongly believe that

supermarket

is

biggest source

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the biggest source

of products from where we get thousand of products which are lowest price as

compare

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compared

to

local

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the local store

local stores

store

.In fact

,

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,

they give several benefits to the local

people which

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people, which

is not possible in local

store

.