Some people with a good education and experience in their field decide to move abroad to work. Why do you think that is? What are the problems caused by this?

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with, many skilled workers move to abroad because the best quality of life offered by the hosting nation which includes high stipend, clean environment, peaceful and supportive working atmosphere and more career opportunities. To illustrate, a recent study by Punjab university states that in India around 40 percent of skilled engineers and highly educated teachers migrated to USA and Canada due to high salary offered by employers.

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get attracted toward more exploration platforms. Some people migrate to abroad to research more in their field because a certain number of rich nations offered them quality of exploration areas with more opportunities and technology development.

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, it's true that many scientists prefer to work with the NASA company as it's equipped with best research technologies as compared to their home

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trend has many negative results. The migration of many skilled workers can lead to shortage of workers in the home nation. Which arises problems of unsustainable development in some sectors.

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, a research showed by Delhi university states that India is suffering from lack infrastructure growth due to shortages of engineers which apparently moved to other nations.

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, it drives down the economy rate of the

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because there will few people pay taxes which will

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result in decrease in amount federal taxes and

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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284 words

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