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Some teachers say students should be organised into groups to study. Others argue students should be made to study alone. Tell the benefits of each study method. Which one do you think is more effective?

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As per the teachers, children should have the adaptability to cope with different pupils while doing any lessons together. Whereas others, believes in individual learning. I shall be discussing in my essay both the views.
Firstly
, to start with the group studies, kids will learn several qualities which will be helpful in the near future. While working with others kids, he will learn to share, help and coordinate with others. It is very necessary to inculcate all the skills from the very tender-age. If he is unaware of any topics, he can discuss it out and solve his problems. While working with a 2 or 3 people together improves our communication skills, confidence.
For example
, whenever in future if he has to give a presentation in a company, he would not be hesitate and confidently put forward his ideas.
Secondly
, studying individual, will help the child to know where is he lacking in specific studies. He can give more time to a particular subject or topic which is difficult to cope up. He can be more creative and there will be a lot of brainstorming done while working alone. So, I pen down, saying both the techniques have their our advantages, depending on the situation, we can decide whether to go with joint studies or alone.
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