The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two diagrams display the location and design
for
a wave-energy machine. The whole process of generation of electricity from Change preposition
of
water
has been shown.
Both the diagrams clearly depict the electricity generation process with one
showing the direction of flow
of Correct article usage
the flow
water
and air
, and the other one
showing the two different kinds of wave-energy machines, that is
the small waves- low output and large waves- high output.
In the first figure, we can easily see the flow
of water
and air
. How the water
through waves enters the machine which in turn produces an air
flow
to rotate the turbines. There is an inlet for flow
of Add an article
the flow
air
from the top of the machine as well which also
helps in the rotation of the turbine.
In the second
figure, the two different kinds of machines have been displayed with their locations. The one
at a higher altitude receives less amount of water
hence
produces
a lower output and Wrong verb form
producing
also
has
a lower installation cost. Wrong verb form
having
While
the other one
receives more amount of water
being
at a lower altitude, Unnecessary verb
apply
therefore
produces
a greater amount of electricity but costs more for installation.Wrong verb form
producing
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, one, flow, air with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "waves" was used 3 times.
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