You work at home and have a problem with a place of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter, -- Describe the problem with the equipment, -- Explain how this problem is affecting, your work, -- Say what you want the shop or company to do.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope you are well.I am writing you regarding
to
my Remove the preposition
apply
laptop
.
I have to say that I am very pleased with this
model of laptop
.I use this
laptop
since is on the market but now seems to have some problems with the web camera.At my work is very useful to use the camera for my video chat with my employers and due to this
defection
my job is affected.I hope that you can find a way to fix Add a comma
,defection
this
problem without to
be necessary to take my Correct your spelling
it
laptop
more
than 6 hours.
I am looking forward to your answer.
All the best
MimiChange preposition
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
