Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Some people think that a high
degrees
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degree
will ensure a good place to work
,
Accept space
,
while
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
believe that experiences in
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
area is more effective.In my opinion is very important to take everything step by step meaning that
first
is better to have a degree and
then
to get experience. It is true that not everything
that is
in theory can be put in
practice
,
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,
but to have a baggage of knowledges is
usefull
being of use or service
useful
.University education has special programs for students in order to prepare them to be able to
practice
their future job.
Moreover
,
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,
during the
students
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student
students'
years a young person can discover new skills and passions.Another good thing about university years is that students have a social life.We do not have to forget that there are a few categories of jobs where is not required to have a degree, it is important to have
experience
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the experience
and skills for that kind of job.
On the other hand
,
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,
in order to develop some skills you have to
practice
.
For example,medicine
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Medicine, for example,
it can be possible without
practice
and special skills, for a surgeon is not enough to be good in theory if he does not have the capability to operate. To conclude
,
Accept space
,
both of
this
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these
sides are important and necessary depend
of
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on
the job that we want to
practice
in the future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • theoretical knowledge
  • specialized training
  • networking
  • baseline requirement
  • financial burden
  • hands-on experience
  • practical skills
  • soft skills
  • dynamic job market
  • entrepreneur
  • formal education
  • portfolio
  • hybrid approach
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