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Some film companies spend millions of dollars on the production of a single movie. Is it necessary to spend a lot of money to make a good movie? What factors contribute to the success of a movie?

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Generally, it depends on the perceptions of the decision makers
such
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 as director, writers and the production companies. Sometimes, the companies paid the A level movie star to perform in their respective movie not because of their
performances but
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performances, but
 because of their fame towards the targeted audiences. It is not a mandatory to spend a lot of money to make a good movie.
For example
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, we can do the filming at the
neighbourhood recent
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neighbourhood, recent
 restaurant for the dinner scene
instead
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 of doing it at the fiver star hotel restaurant. The most crucial part is the performance of the main artists and
also
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 the marketing level of the companies. If the company is aiming to shoot the modern technology or scientific movies, they
may probably needs
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may probably need
 to spend
certain amount
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a certain amount
 of money on the filming set compared to the normal romantic comedy movies. In summary, It is really difficult to tell what is right or wrong regarding about the usage or spending on the filming set.
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, to the certain extent, I am sure that the companies can monitor the investment
on
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in
 the film.
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