Many people want their country to host an international sporting event. Others believe that international sporting events bring more problems than benefits. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

With growth in sports events
lot
of people wish their
country
to put up international events of the sport, but some believe that it is not worth putting up because it give more problem
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
any of the benefits. In
this
essay I would like to express my point of view with suitable example.
Firstly
, Conducting a sport
event
at international level cost huge amount of money, but it attracts
lot
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a lot
lots
of tourists which help in hike in employment and as well as raise in foreign currency inflow. Host
such
affair gives the
country
boost for a long run in attracting people from different parts of the world and that continues even after the incident is over as their
country
is advertise during the
event
.
For instance
, If Dubai, host athletic international
event
,
then
many peoples would be attracted to come and see player's coming from different countries. As well as
lot
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lots
of public will come to support their home
country
. Which rises in cash inflow in
country
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the country
and it increase spending of peoples and overall increase employment in Dubai.
Secondly
, Peoples who believe, that it gives more problem
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
benefit, I someone agree with it as if any, international
event
is host as I said before, it cost a
lot
but not only for conducting
event
more spending is
also
done for security of peoples. As many people will come into the provincial their is chance of cultural loss of the locals and we cannot neglect that it might cause more pollution in the environment
such
as more noise pollution and there is a chance of an upsurge in waste.
For instance
, If Dubai host
this
affair, they need to take care of the security of all the players and they need to raise the security in the place where the ceremony is going to be conducted so that circumstance can be run smoothly. They
also
need to spend a
lot
of waste collector as many peoples will not know and will might pollute the area. And as
event
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the event
an event
is conducted peoples will cheer for their home provincial player which can cause noise pollution for the neighbour locals hood. To summarize, Both sides have their own pros and cons, but I believe is that having
such
events can help
country
to grow, I agree they need to spend a
lot
to have
such
events, but what money they earn and reputation they will get can help the
country
in the long run and will benefit their
country
locals only and it will help
country
to have good relation with other countries.
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