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Should young people follow older people’s advice or is it good for them to challenge older people’s opinions and thoughts? Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Young people should follow older people
,
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,
s advice it is not good for them to challenge older people
,
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,
s opinions and thoughts.There are many
reason
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reasons
 behind the advices of older people. Older people have
lot
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lots
 of ideas
,
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,
thoughts and advices that help the youth to tackle their problem.Adults have to take
advice
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the advice
 of their elders because advices of elders help the youth lot in life to be a successful person.
Mostly
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Most
 our grandfather and grandmother are elder at our
home we
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home, we
 should have to
folloew
to travel behind, go after, come after
follow
 the advices of our
grand parents
a parent of your father or mother
grandparents
.Some people think tat old is gold and gold is precious
whic
interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class
which
 have
lot
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lots
 of advantages.Our grandparents or elders are
also
 like that they are very precious
for
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to
 us so we should have to follow their
advices
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advice
.
On the other
hand their
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hand, there
hand there
 are valid reasons for challenging the views of
elder person
Suggestion
older persons
elder persons
elder people
an elder person
.We live in the
world
 of technology
,
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,
sciene
the place where some action occurs
scene
science
scenes
 and
world
 where we have to give a valid reason for every single movement done by us.Here the advices of elder
pwerson
a human being
person
doesn
mature female of mammals of which the male is called 'buck'
does
,
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,
t
in the direction of
to
 work.May the elder person have good
ideas but
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ideas, but
 these ideas
doesn't work
Suggestion
don't work
 in todays
world
.Elder persons believe in astrology
beieve
accept as true; take to be true
believe
 in astrology to take important
decesion
the act of making up your mind about something
decision
decisions
 which is not appropriate in today's
world
. In
conlusin both
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conclusion, both
conclusion both
 the views are correct.It is dependent on
individual
Suggestion
the individual
 which
decesion
the act of making up your mind about something
decision
 is best for him.While some adults like to follow the advices of their elders or some like to challenge older people thoughts and ideas.
Accordingly time
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Accordingly, time
 is changing and according to time some old
traditon
an inherited pattern of thought or action
tradition
traditions
 have to be refused or
their
in or at that place
there
 is a
time
Suggestion
timely
 move with today's
world
.
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