some people prefer on-on-one lessons while others prefer groups discuss both views & give your opinion

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Learning is the hallmark of human beings and
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is what primarily separates us from other living beings on
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planet. Learning
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comes in many forms and no style of
learning is
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learning, is
optimal for everyone.
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is partially the reason while some students excel
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in
schools while
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schools, while
other limp through it. Having said that, it is my understanding that everyone is capable of learning if
right tools
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the right tools
are provided and correct methods applied. In
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essay, I will discuss the one-on-one and
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learning models and give my opinion on their effectiveness in different domains.
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Learning In our
society schools,
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society, schools,
universities and other institution of higher learning use the
model
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of
group
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learning and for good reasons. If it was not for the
classroom
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style teaching, it would be impossible to educate the masses these days.
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,
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does not mean the
model
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is perfect. We all have been in classrooms where some people passed/aced the exams with flying
colours while
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colours, while
many struggled to grasp even the basics of the subject being taught. It is convenient to sidestep the question of whether it was
school’s fault
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the school’s fault
or student’s for failing to learn the subject. But it is exactly the question which merits
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discussion. There are students who enjoy the
classroom
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setting and cherish the
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setting for
many opportunities
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the many opportunities
it provides for exchange of ideas and socialisation. On the flip side, there are many whom the classrooms makes nervous and they require individualised attention for learning – attention which is impossible to get in a crowded
classroom
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. One-on-One Learning Another factor which needs to be considered while comparing one-on-one and
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lessons is the domain which is being taught.
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, it would be impossible to learn martial arts or dancing without other people around. And
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, it will be impossible to learn guitar in a class full of amateurs. So
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another nuance of learning which is often overlooked by parents and educators. Actually, history has some lessons which are applicable to our discussion. For the longest time, the
model
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for
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of
learning which was widely accepted in the world was apprenticeship. In
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model
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a student would work under someone who has
wealth
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a wealth
of experience,
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example a carpenter
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example, a carpenter
or a sculptor for 5 to 6 years and learn on the job. The student would get feedback on his/her mistakes and learn by doing the work
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of sitting and memorising as one does in the
classroom
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. Conclusion In my view,
group
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learning and one-on-one lessons have their place in the learning system.
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, much depends on what is being taught and the aptitude of the student. For me, I prefer a
group
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setting for learning skills
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as cricket, dancing or martial arts and one-on-one lessons for skills
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as weight lifting, swimming and tennis. The reason for my preference is that in
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the classroom
setting one benefits from the synergy of the
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and free exchange of ideas, while in one-on-one lessons, one benefits from the individualised attention and feedback of the teacher.
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