some students tend to play computer games rather than do sports.Why is this? What can be done to tackle the problem?

Accessing
compters
a machine for performing calculations automatically
computers
computer
and internet is massively increased in the recent
dacades
a period of 10 years
decades
, and most the students spend their valuable
time
on computers to play games.In
this
essay we will discuss about the positive points and negative
poitns
railroad track having two movable rails and necessary connections; used to turn a train from one track to another or to store rolling stock
points
as well as how to overcome
disadvatages
the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position
disadvantages
. In the
earler
earlier in time; previously
earlier
days students spend more
time
on physical games, These games were suited to maintain constant body
fitess
the quality of being suitable
fitness
fits
, but in now a days most of the people want to spend their
time
on
computer
games, because of circumstances and
time
.
Firstly
the positive points about
computer
games are, playing
computer
games can develop
students
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students'
thinking skills. Many popular games require abstract and high level thinking skills in order to win, skills that may not be taught at school.
For example
, children need to follow instructions, solve complex problems and use logic in many of the games that are currently popular.
Such
experience will be beneficial to a
kids
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kid
in the future.
However
,
Accept space
,
we have more concerns about
computer
games
,
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,
most of the
students
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students'
student's
behaviour while playing online games because most of the games
contains
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contain
violance
an act of aggression (as one against a person who resists)
violence
balance
and it will affect the mental condition
.
Accept space
.
While playing games
stundes
spend more
time
on computers, by reason of
this
physical body condition will affect
.
Accept space
.
In order to avoid these type of drawbacks, Mainly parents and teachers need to take care of students while selecting
computer
games and they will suggest them by conducting more physical games and activities in schools /colleges.
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