It is better for boys and girls to study separately rather than study in mixed sex classes. They are less distracted and this leads to better results. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Is it better for boys and girls to study separately? One of the reasons is to prevent pupils with different sex to
distruct
regard as untrustworthy; regard with suspicion; have no faith or confidence in
distrust
distract
each other, leading to better results. Nowadays it is very important to eliminate a segregation border between the different genders. Business, science and educational
ogranizations prmarily
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organizations, primarily
organizations prmarily
organizations primarily
ogranizations primarily
shoud
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
consider human personality and
proffesional
engaged in a profession or engaging in as a profession or means of livelihood
professional
abilities to perform modern world’s tasks. So the kids and
teenages
a juvenile between the onset of puberty and maturity
teenagers
should be
tought
impart skills or knowledge to
taught
thought
this
concept from the very
beggining
the event consisting of the start of something
beginning
beginnings
of their educational process. It is interesting that phrase “don’t think about a white bear”
immidately
without delay or hesitation; with no time intervening
immediately
makes you think about those white fluffy creatures.
This
is how our mind usually works.
Therefore
, telling pupils not to
thinks
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think
about girls or boys and focus on education would
probaly
with considerable certainty; without much doubt
probably
make them
to think
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think
about opposite gender even
more harder
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harder
. Generally, the restrictions for a
kids
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kid
and teenagers forces them to violate those limitations. It is better to give them a solid
knowlage
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
about the
moderm
belonging to the modern era; since the Middle Ages
modern
world and freedom to decide how to behave in a particular situation.
Actually all
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Actually, all
types of segregation
is
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are
bad. The world is not so big, and a human population growing exponentially during the
last
hunderd
being ten more than ninety
hundred
years. So we need to learn how to live and interact with each other event
from
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for
the
primay
of first rank or importance or value; direct and immediate rather than secondary
primary
school. And of
course
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course, this
this
conclusion could be applied not only for a different
genders
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gender
, but
also
for different races, religions, sexual orientation etc.
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