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Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away?

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Food
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 is the most important and valuable element for the survival of human beings.
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, in recent ti
me,
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times
many people living in the urban area do
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don’t care
bout the value of
food
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 and which rs
esults i
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
results
n throwing the
food
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 in bins.
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 essay will discuss the main problems due to which many individuals throw
food
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 and it will outline po
ssible solution t
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a possible solution
o solve
this
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 issue. The foremost problem related to wastage of
food
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 is related to the income of the people. In recent times, the median wage of people in the urban is very high and most of the
food
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 is very cheap. So, when people go to any
food
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 shop they tend to buy different type of
food
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 in large quantity without concerning about their consumptions.
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, there is no culture to keep the leftover
food
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 for the
next
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 day and
on the contrary
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 families th
row i
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throws
t in the wastage area.
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, recently an American
food
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 report shows that tons of
food
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 is wasted by the households every month in
only California.
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in California only
 In order to solve the above problem, the awareness campaign is essential regarding the drawbacks of wasting
food
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. There are
third
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 world countries in which the daily salary of people ar
e v
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is
ery low and they can’t afford a healthy
food
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 their families. So, it is utmost important to make realization among people that how important is the
food
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 and if they can save some money on the
food
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; that money can be donated to the people of poor countries for their grocery expenses. Wasting
food
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 is very dangerous as the resources are being unused. These resources can be given to people who can’t afford
such
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 luxury of life. The non-profit organization can spread awareness in
this
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 regard to help people waste less and contribute more for we
llbeing o
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the wellbeing
well being
f others.
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