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Do you believe that professional athletes make good role models for young people?

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Many physically active and full of energy people imagine their ideal, perfect and motivator person
on
Suggestion
in
 the guise of athletes,
besides
 numerous young people imitate them and try to be like them physically and spiritually. In
this
 essay I will try to demonstrate some of my personal opinions and give reasons and examples to why I support the idea of professional sportsmen make good role for youth. There is a good range of reasons to believe that athletes are the best models for teenagers.
Firstly
, a hard work and dedication are always together with these people and their lifestyle is
also
 a good pattern for youth who have plenty amount of leisure time or even more. Many people spend their time on watching
tv playing
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tv, playing
 computer
games etc
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games, etc.
games etc.
 while others do their obligations on their best. For
examole
an item of information that is typical of a class or group
example
: As many people may face unfortunate people complain all the time as their health is not good or they had no
luck but
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luck, but
on the other hand
 they don't do anything better at all.
Moreover some
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Moreover, some
 type of adults who are rich gets double size bigger income and most of them are athletes. Is there any relativity here? Yes,
as a
result these
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result, these
 people dedicate themselves to what they do as well as what should do
so their
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so, their
 desire is
also
 proportional to what they do.
On the other hand
, many people
aknowledge
declare to be true or admit the existence or reality or truth of
acknowledge
 that athletes who have a good quality are more responsible and they could control the situation that happens around them so with
this
 way our young growing generation should learn many things from them. In conclusion, I should say that a hard work of athletes, and their tolerance are the best pattern for young people so maybe they may
also
 want to be athletes.
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