Children are generally more successful in foreign languages than adults. Thus it is better to learn language in childhood. To what extent do you argee or disagree?
Since
time
immermorial
, it is the trend that many parents encourage their kids to learn many languages in order to gain the benefits because they are more likely to acquire new information rather than adults and learning languages should be long past; beyond the limits of memory or tradition or recorded history
immemorial
start
as soon as possible. I truly support the view and Suggestion
started
starting
i
shall propose some of the explanation in the following refers to the speaker or writer
I
paragraghs
.
one of several distinct subdivisions of a text intended to separate ideas; the beginning is usually marked by a new indented line
paragraphs
paragraph
First
and foremost, children are capable of absorbing different languages in the world easily because they have good command of language thanks to the development of the brain, especially toddlers can easily imitate from their parents. One more reason proves that youngsters find it as easy as pie to assimilate new information is due to their curiousity
about the outside world and led to a state in which you want to learn more about something
curiosity
grown-ups
faster. With the purpose of mastering a language, ones has to devote enough a fully developed person from maturity onward
grownups
grownups'
grownup's
time
and effort and it is true that young people have more leisure than adults because all they need to do is only study. Hence
, time
for revision and experience practical knowledge is futher
advantageous than older generations. Above to or at a greater extent or degree or a more advanced stage ('further' is used more often than 'farther' in this abstract sense)
further
this
, time
and their developing acquisition skills are two undeniable facts.
Conversely
, adults are too busy that they have to work and take responsibility in many aspects such
as grow their children or take care of his/her parents. That is
why they lack of time
and their
for that in or at that place
there
discrupt
them from learning continuously. make a break in
disrupt
Moreover
, when people's mental
is not stableSuggestion
mentality
,
they tend not to finish anything effectively and Accept space
,
this
is true for adults. Older and older ages have less sharp mind
and lower critical Suggestion
a less sharp mind
intellected
skills. Consequently
, they acquire new information at a very low pace.
In conclusion, it can be said that young people reap more advantages in picking up a languages
than adults due to developing skills and Suggestion
language
time
and i
believe that if a small baby and be influenced by new language soon, they can be refers to the speaker or writer
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master
easily.Suggestion
mastered
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