Children are generally more successful in foreign languages than adults. Thus it is better to learn language in childhood. To what extent do you argee or disagree?

Since
time
immermorial
long past; beyond the limits of memory or tradition or recorded history
immemorial
, it is the trend that many parents encourage their kids to learn many languages in order to gain the benefits because they are more likely to acquire new information rather than adults and learning languages should be
start
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started
starting
as soon as possible. I truly support the view and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
shall propose some of the explanation in the following
paragraghs
one of several distinct subdivisions of a text intended to separate ideas; the beginning is usually marked by a new indented line
paragraphs
paragraph
.
First
and foremost, children are capable of absorbing different languages in the world easily because they have good command of language thanks to the development of the brain, especially toddlers can easily imitate from their parents. One more reason proves that youngsters find it as easy as pie to assimilate new information is due to their
curiousity
a state in which you want to learn more about something
curiosity
about the outside world and led to
grown-ups
a fully developed person from maturity onward
grownups
grownups'
grownup's
faster. With the purpose of mastering a language, ones has to devote enough
time
and effort and it is true that young people have more leisure than adults because all they need to do is only study.
Hence
,
time
for revision and experience practical knowledge is
futher
to or at a greater extent or degree or a more advanced stage ('further' is used more often than 'farther' in this abstract sense)
further
advantageous than older generations. Above
this
,
time
and their developing acquisition skills are two undeniable facts.
Conversely
, adults are too busy that they have to work and take responsibility in many aspects
such
as grow their children or take care of his/her parents.
That is
why they lack of
time
and
their
in or at that place
there
for that
discrupt
make a break in
disrupt
them from learning continuously.
Moreover
, when people's
mental
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mentality
is not stable
,
Accept space
,
they tend not to finish anything effectively and
this
is true for adults. Older and older ages have
less sharp mind
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a less sharp mind
and lower critical
intellected
skills.
Consequently
, they acquire new information at a very low pace. In conclusion, it can be said that young people reap more advantages in picking up a
languages
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language
than adults due to developing skills and
time
and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
believe that if a small baby and be influenced by new language soon, they can be
master
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mastered
easily.
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