The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
A glance at the bar graph provided reveals
about
places visited by various Change preposition
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people
living in Canada people
such
as native Canadians, new migrants
who born
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were born
English
-speaking countries
and new migrants
for whom English
is not the first language in their country.
Overall
, it is evident that Canadians prefer the cinema to the theatre, but the library is popular among new migrants
, which It
may reflect the financial circumstances of these new citizens.
Looking at the figure in more detail, the cinema is by far the most popular for those with Correct pronoun usage
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English
as their first language — 70% native people
while
migrants
from English speaking
and Add a hyphen
English-speaking
non-
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non-English
English
speaking countries
made up to
about 65% and 50% respectively.
Turning to the immigrants from other Change preposition
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non-
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non-English
English
speaking countries
they
are more interested in going to libraries, which is 55%, Correct pronoun usage
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however
, roughly 40% of the other two groups say they visit the library.
However
, the zoo is most famous among English
-Speaking immigrants made up which made up about 50 %,whereas
native Canadians and non-
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non-English
English
speaking migrants
sum up to about 40% and 32% respectively.Turning to further
information, the theatre is least popular for all type people
with only 10% of non-Change preposition
of people
English
-speaking migrants
attending which is exactly half the percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
Canada
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Canadian
people
and here immigrants from English
-speaking countries
tops the list.Submitted by shokhrukh95 on
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