the chart below shows the number of passengers arriving at a train station per hour across a day,and also the average price (in US DOllars) of their tickets.
This
table provides information about the number of passengers
arriving at the train station per hour per day and the average ticket pay
at a certain time.
From the table, we can see that there were three times that reached a high number of Wrong verb form
paid
passengers
at 12 noon as many as 700 passengers
, second
at 8 am as many as 690 passengers
, and at 6 pm
as many as 670 passengers
. And there were three times that refused a drastic decrease, namely at 4 pm
230 passengers
, second
at 2 pm
290, and finally
at 10 pm
300 passengers
.
The increase and decrease in passengers
are also
followed also followed
by high and low train ticket prices. At 12 noon the check Remove the redundancy
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pay
is quite high at $ 31, the Replace the word
payment
second
high license pay is at 8 am for $ 29, the
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and the
third
at 6 am for $ 23. At 6 pm
the check pay drops dramatically at
$ 11, Change preposition
to
second
in
4 Change the preposition
at
pm
at $ 17, and finally
at 10 pm
at $ 18.
As a whole, it can be seen the interconnected relationship between the number of passengers
and record prices. But at night it becomes an exception license price decline.Submitted by rezkiseptian07 on
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