The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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talk

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talks

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about a way to make better the

environment

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confirming the fact that only Governments and Large companies can do it

instead

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a

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of a

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single person not. In my opinion

Government

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the Government

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could improve the

environment

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giving

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by giving

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some tips to guide the population

such

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as recycling with criteria,

reduce

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reducing

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the

consume

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consumption

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of

plastic

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a plastic

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bottle

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bottles

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or better don't

use

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plastic at all

also

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if

this

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can be difficult, or

pay

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paying

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attention to the temperature of our house we don't need to stay at 25

degree

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degrees

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,

also

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when we cook we have to

use

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not a lot of gas etc. In fact here could be useful the intervention of Large companies because a lot of products are packed

by

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with

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plastic because it is cheap and consequential

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many products are cheap than

other

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others

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which are created

followed

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following

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the criteria of sustainability. So

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may be one of the principal

motivation

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motivations

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of why some people decide to buy a product than

other

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others

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.

To

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On

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the other

hand

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this

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is only a small part that we can do

for

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to

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make a difference in

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environment

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the environment

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, indeed we have to understand that there are a lot of right things that we can follow,

such

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as the

use

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of

bicycle

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bicycles

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instead

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the car,

also

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the

use

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of public transport

in fact

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, in fact,

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there is difference between

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use

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using

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a car for 10

person

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people

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for example

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,

instead

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one bus for the same numbers. And in

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this

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,this

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the approach of governments is fundamental because

for

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to

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make an eco-friendly city must

be need

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need

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to some works like the building of street only for bike etc. In

conclusion

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,conclusion

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I'm agree

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I agree

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as regards that

government

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the government

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and big companies can work together

for

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to

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make difference but only

for give

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forgive

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to people the right examples to follow and do what a person can't do by himself, but

I'm

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I also disagree

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also

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disagree because we all can do a small part to reduce the impact of

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environment

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the environment

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.